Help with title

2 months ago | AdamBolander (Member)

Hey guys, I just need a little input. What do you think sounds like a better title? "Hero's Exile" or "Exile of Heroes"?

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  1. bombtasticnovels (Member)

    Posted 2 months ago

    Hero's exile sounds like one person (a hero) like his exile or that hero's exile. Exile of heroes is like the exile of ALL heroes. So is it about one hero's exile or multiple/all heroes exile?

  2. AdamBolander (Member)

    Posted 2 months ago

    There are two heroes who are sent into exile, so it's an "Exile of Heroes." But it's also an exile FOR heroes, so it could be a "Hero's Exile." Either one could work. I just want to know which sounds better.

  3. Psycho Gecko (Member)

    Posted 2 months ago

    Exile: The Hero's Journey
    Exiled Hero
    Gyro: Exile Hunger
    Ex-Isle's Hero: The Custody Battle

    Ooh, neat, Exile's Hero.

    See, this is why I shouldn't answer questions when I'm in a fun mood. Have a song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lLclBfKj48

  4. AdamBolander (Member)

    Posted 2 months ago

    Actually it's the sequel to another book I wrote, so the whole title will be "Juryokine: Hero's Exile/Exile of Heroes"

  5. ubersoft (Member)

    Posted 2 months ago

    Based on sound alone, Juryokine: Exile of Heroes works better rhythmically. It has a good beat and I can dance to it.

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  6. AdamBolander (Member)

    Posted 2 months ago

    *pulls banjo out of thin air*
    Well why didn'cha say sooooo?

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