I'm back, with a completely different story.

8 months ago | Typist Kid (Member)

Well, guys, you might know me from around a year ago. I started writing my first web serial, and then dropped it after the first few months. I knew that I wasn't exactly good, but I only know now how bad I was. Yeesh. I also did things that I regret. But that's to be expected.

I've... matured a lot since then, I think. I wrote a lot of short stories (Most are terrible, and will never be released. Also, they didn't end.), and I've been getting better since. I decided to work on The Zone again. but this time I've changed a lot of things that just embarrass me to think about. I've put up a new description, started posting on royal road as well, but my listing is still the same as before. It says awaiting editor attention.

I'm unsure whether that means I had to approach someone because it wasn't listed on the submissions list, like the last time I edited it. In the end I just decided to ask.

Any thoughts on the story would appreciated as well.

Read responses...

Responses

  1. JohnCalliganWrites (Member)

    Posted 8 months ago

    Are you interested in a review / critique trade on your opening chapter? Mine is listed here on the website: winoc the traveler

    I can put my review wherever you want it, in case you aren't on here yet.

  2. Typist Kid (Member)

    Posted 8 months ago

    I am interested, and I am also on the website.

    The name of my story is The Zone. However, like I said before, the description on it is not the same as my new one. I am on Royal road, however, so you could review my story there. As for your story, I shall begin reading it today. I am unsure when I might be able to get a review out now, but I reckon I can do it before the week end.

    (Though a review isn't exactly what I came for.)

  3. JohnCalliganWrites (Member)

    Posted 8 months ago

    Sounds great. You don't have to go nuts on mine if you don't feel like it. Casual is fine.

  4. Typist Kid (Member)

    Posted 8 months ago

    Well, I'm not gonna go nuts (Because said option is currently unreachable), but I think your story is marvelous. As such, I certainly am gonna aim for more than just casual.

    Also, I just realised that my story is in the super hero section of top web fiction. That is why I want to change my description.

  5. JohnCalliganWrites (Member)

    Posted 8 months ago

    Reading yours now. By the way, your link on the guide takes you to a dead page.

    Also, thank you, I really appreciate that

    Edit: I put a review up for you on the website. Thanks for sharing!

  6. Typist Kid (Member)

    Posted 8 months ago

    Well, that's kinda because I deleted the original page. The proper link is on the edited description.

    Thanks for the review. I put one up as well. I honestly, took half an hour to figure out what to write. It was my first review, and there's a lot of stuff that I didn't know how to say. Oh well, live and learn I guess.

  7. JohnCalliganWrites (Member)

    Posted 8 months ago

    Thanks for the great review. Rep +1

  8. Typist Kid (Member)

    Posted 8 months ago

    Thanks. :)

Reply

You must log in to post.