Need some art feedback, please!

1 month ago | ubersoft (Member)

Hi all. I need some quick gut reactions, if you have the time. I'm working on new art for The Points Between and I've come up with two possibilities:

https://www.eviscerati.org/files/novels/TPBCover01-small.jpg

https://www.eviscerati.org/files/novels/TPBCover02-small.jpg

Thoughts? Preferences? Hate 'em both? I'm just looking for immediate reactions, you don't have to know the material, I just want to know if the images grab you, push you away, intrigue you, engender feelings of rage/disgust...

Thanks for your help!

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  1. Shaeor (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    There's no good negative space in the second one. Between the two, I think the first does what it's intended to and the style itself is pretty interesting in its own way. So that, since it hits the mark, I'd say I really like the first.

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  2. Tartra (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    The second one feels kinda bland compared to the first, like, "Ooh, it's an unlit house!" The first one worked better for me to imagine that something 'bad' was in the darkness, but to read the actual story to see what. Just more compelling that way.

    I like the red letters. I'm just a little annoyed that I can't find a hidden meaning behind why those letters in particular are red. Is there one? Would I have to read the whole serial to understand?

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  3. Dary (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    The first one, definitely. Golden ratio and all that jazz.

  4. ubersoft (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    Tartra, the only hidden meaning of the red letters is that those are the letters between the other letters. :)

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  5. Tartra (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    @ubersoft - Aw, I figured. :( It's still nice, but I personally - very personally - was hoping there was more to it, like they'd spell something out or add up to a number or... well, you know what I mean. Good use of red.

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  6. ubersoft (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    I would love to work something like that in, but... I haven't. :-/

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  7. Walter (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    I like the first one, just seems, I dunno, more ominous? They are bot hpretty good.

  8. unice5656 (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    #1 for sure. You need empty space for a title like "The Points Between".

  9. revfitz (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    The first one is definitely the better of the two. The horizontal lines of the trees with the narrow path do well in a longer canvas like a book cover. The composition is better and it looks less photoshoped than the second. I would be more excited to pick up and read the first one :)

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  10. ubersoft (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    Thank you all for your responses!

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  11. Psycho Gecko (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    I liked the first one. Not so much complexity related to the way the colors are shifted, which worked better for me. The extra detail on the trees and the house Less eye strain. I didn't care for the red letters not having any particular meaning.

    Once again, late to the party.

  12. Fiona Gregory (Moderator)

    Posted 1 month ago

    Ooh, does this mean you're going to be continuing The Points Between?

    I think the art suits the story well, leads right into the prologue.

  13. ubersoft (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    I am! But it's complicated, and I'm still trying to work a few things out. Might post about it here.

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  14. Chrysalis (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    I like the first one better, but personally I'd make the title much, much bigger. The image works well enough as a background for the title, I think.

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