New Summary! Help?

1 year ago | AdamBolander (Member)

I just finished writing Juryokine: Exile of Heroes last night, and I threw together a summary this morning. What do you guys think? Any suggestions?

They say no good deed goes unpunished, and the Yasmikan government is determined to make sure that comes true. A year has passed since Toke Gnasher, the infamous Juryokine, stopped Professor Navras from destroying the Sorakine city, Hashira. Now he and Zashiel are on the run from the law, hounded by bounty hunters from both their races, and have no choice but to jump the border into the neighboring country of Vlangur. There, in what was once Yasmik’s greatest enemy, they find work aboard the Seventh Swordfish, a floating circus that might actually offer them safety from the ones chasing them. But though Navras has fallen, all is not well in Yasmik. A cult has risen, with Toke as their guiding deity, and the Seraph, Sir Klevon, has sent a threat against Zashiel greater than any they’ve faced before… her sister.

Author of The Gray Ranger, The Slayer and The Sphinx, Juryokine, Amber Silverblood, and more! Read for free on

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