Review Exchange: Nature's Kingdom.

3 weeks ago | Moonfeather (Member)

Looking for someone to exchange with or do a review of Nature's Kingdom.
It's fairly early in the story and not too much has happened yet, but a first impression would be cool. It's around 7 chapters.

Let me know what you think.

Worlds are changing. With the rapid increase of mutants, metahumans, and superpowered beings, hints of events with cataclysmic proportions can be seen on the horizon.

Phenomena that has not been witnessed since the Age of Gods.

Mercy Gaunt, a somewhat popular teenage girl, finds her life turned upside down as she is dropped into the world of ‘Capes’ and mythical beings. A world of war, conspiracy, and political intrigue. Full of battles that have lasted millennia with deep grudges that had taken root in the past.

As she remembers her childhood dream for utopia, Mercy must decide if she has what it takes to protect the people she loves.


Here's the listing:

Here's the start of the novel:

Read responses...


  1. thelonewanderer (Member)

    Posted 2 weeks ago


    I think we're in the same place. Both of us have just started a new serial, though I've got about two fewer chapters and my listing is still in the submission queue.

    Here is the link to my own story. Let me know if you're ok to do a review swap (the first impression as you put it) with this and we can go ahead.

  2. thelonewanderer (Member)

    Posted 2 weeks ago

    Oops. Forgot to share the link. Here it is.

  3. Moonfeather (Member)

    Posted 2 weeks ago

    Sure, I'm down. I'll read through it and give my thoughts.

  4. nippoten (Member)

    Posted 2 weeks ago

    I'll take a crack at it, too. But I do have a few other reviews that are way overdue by this point...

    With that said, I'll put yours in my things-to-do list! :)

  5. Moonfeather (Member)

    Posted 2 weeks ago

    Thanks Nippoten. I'll try to have reviews up by the end of next week.

  6. ScreamingCandle (Member)

    Posted 5 days ago

    Hey. Site newbie here, but I'll take a crack at it. My story is also in the submissions queue and the amount of zeros I'm getting out of the visitor numbers is, quite frankly, giving me the blues and I'm wondering if I'm missing the point somehow. An overview would help and I'll be happy to do a review for you.

    And to be friendly, if I think it sucks, I'll shoot you a PM :)

    Have a good one.


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  7. Moonfeather (Member)

    Posted 2 days ago

    My reviews are going to be a little late guys I'm busy catching up in school and with work.


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