Review Request and Swap: Inheritors

4 months ago | Megajoule (Member)

Hello! I'm fairly new, but I've been lurking for a little and would be happy to exchange reviews as my serial just got added to the site.

The first arc just finished last night. Here's the link: https://inheritorsserial.com/

The first episode is here: https://inheritorsserial.com/2018/02/28/episode-one/

Any feedback is lovely, and I'll respond in kind if requested! I'm a medium speed reader, so it won't take me forever to get a good feel for what I think about the piece I'm reviewing.

Thank you so much!

https://inheritorsserial.com / a clone of the greatest superhero in the world, with only a fraction of the power

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  1. Rhodeworks (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    I'll shoot a review up at some point in the near future, sure.

  2. Megajoule (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    Thanks @Rhodeworks

    I just started your serial, so I'd be happy to review yours when I've read more.

    https://inheritorsserial.com / a clone of the greatest superhero in the world, with only a fraction of the power
  3. Rhodeworks (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    Feel free! But as always, I don't consider it a swap or anything like that. I just like reviewing things for people.

  4. Docmars (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    hey id be up for a swap
    https://www.camelotmagazine.com/fiction/2017/7/8/tomarrow-girl

  5. Megajoule (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    @Docmars

    Sure, I'll be happy to!

    https://inheritorsserial.com / a clone of the greatest superhero in the world, with only a fraction of the power
  6. Docmars (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    I will start reading yours tomorrow hope to get review done by next week

  7. Rhodeworks (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    Finished my first read-through. Have to say, I liked it -- especially the direction it took near the end of Chapter 12. It really made me sit up and wonder where the story'll be going. It'll take me a few days to go over my notes and read a few of the chapters again.

  8. Megajoule (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    @Rhodeworks

    I'm looking forward to your thoughts! I'm glad you liked what you've read so far.

    I really like your voice in your writing. I'm only a few chapters in, but it flows effortlessly.

    https://inheritorsserial.com / a clone of the greatest superhero in the world, with only a fraction of the power
  9. Megajoule (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    @Docsmars

    Sure thing! I'll be reading yours soon.

    https://inheritorsserial.com / a clone of the greatest superhero in the world, with only a fraction of the power
  10. Megajoule (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    @Rhodeworks

    Thank you for your review! It's excellent, and I'm definitely incorporating all your thoughts moving forward. One of the things I've especially struggled with is how long my chapters are, and I've been debating moving to a twice weekly schedule with shorter chapters (essentially splitting them in half). I'm definitely in line with your thinking on your critiques.

    Again, thanks so much!

    https://inheritorsserial.com / a clone of the greatest superhero in the world, with only a fraction of the power
  11. Rhodeworks (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    No problem, my friend! It was a good read. Even with the stuff which I wasn't a big fan of, like the video logs and the sex scene, I can see why you have them there and what they mean for Gabe's character (he comes through pretty well, which is why the redundancies stuck out to me). There's some serials I read where I get confused why something is even included.

  12. Docmars (Member)

    Posted 4 months ago

    and posted!

  13. Megajoule (Member)

    Posted 3 months ago

    ok @Docmars, my review is up, I hope it's fair to you.

    https://inheritorsserial.com / a clone of the greatest superhero in the world, with only a fraction of the power

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