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Review Request: Battle is an Art
I'm currently working on the 10th chapter to a serial I started a few months back and decided that it was about time I tried to get an audience. So with this post, I offer a review swap with whoever checks out the story. I get free advertisement and you get free advertisement, it's a win-win.
With that said here's a brief description:
Herah always considered herself a master artist, be it a painting, sculpture, portrait or whatever, Herah could make it without problem.
Combine this with her gift to make her art into a reality, her great combat prowess and her infinite amount of willpower, she was clearly a no-brainer to participate in Recompense; a series of trials that if one won would grant the winner anything they wanted.
With each trial being not only a battle to win but to survive, and the fact that the losers got a prize that most really didn't want, this meant the Cendruex was left with some stiff competition.
But with a broken No.2 pencil, a nervous smithing apprentice, a too trusting liar and an honest, omniscient jackass, Herah had Recompense in the bag.
After all, Herah was a master artist, and she always considered battle exactly that: an art.
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Posted 10 months ago
Funny thing, I forgot the link:https://delugeoftheabyss.wordpress.com/battle-is/battle-is-an-art/
My bad.
Posted 10 months ago
Not sure if you're interested in trading, but I'll take a look at your story. I just caught up with two long stories in a row so I've got some time for sure.
If she literally can make her art a reality, that's pretty cool. I toyed with that same idea slightly a long time ago but have long since forgotten the details.
In any case, I will check it out, but if you're willing to trade, I linked my own ongoing story below.
Much like your idea, mine also involves an artistic creation being the catalyst of power, so we're kindred spirits, haha.
https://musicmastersdotblog.wordpress.com/
Posted 10 months ago
I'm up for a swap
https://www.camelotmagazine.com/fiction/2017/7/8/tomarrow-girl
Posted 10 months ago
@Hejin57 @Docmars
Sure on both accounts
Posted 10 months ago
@Loud Thomas
AsYou may have already seen I went through your whole story. Just also letting you know I can also post an overall official review on here if your story is listed here. It's interesting and very detailed, and I'll be following it to from now on. Glad I decided to give it a read in the end.
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