Review Request: Battle is an Art

10 months ago | Loud Thomas (Member)

I'm currently working on the 10th chapter to a serial I started a few months back and decided that it was about time I tried to get an audience. So with this post, I offer a review swap with whoever checks out the story. I get free advertisement and you get free advertisement, it's a win-win.
With that said here's a brief description:
Herah always considered herself a master artist, be it a painting, sculpture, portrait or whatever, Herah could make it without problem.
Combine this with her gift to make her art into a reality, her great combat prowess and her infinite amount of willpower, she was clearly a no-brainer to participate in Recompense; a series of trials that if one won would grant the winner anything they wanted.
With each trial being not only a battle to win but to survive, and the fact that the losers got a prize that most really didn't want, this meant the Cendruex was left with some stiff competition.
But with a broken No.2 pencil, a nervous smithing apprentice, a too trusting liar and an honest, omniscient jackass, Herah had Recompense in the bag.
After all, Herah was a master artist, and she always considered battle exactly that: an art.

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  1. Loud Thomas (Member)

    Posted 10 months ago

    Funny thing, I forgot the link:
    My bad.

  2. Hejin57 (Member)

    Posted 10 months ago

    Not sure if you're interested in trading, but I'll take a look at your story. I just caught up with two long stories in a row so I've got some time for sure.

    If she literally can make her art a reality, that's pretty cool. I toyed with that same idea slightly a long time ago but have long since forgotten the details.

    In any case, I will check it out, but if you're willing to trade, I linked my own ongoing story below.

    Much like your idea, mine also involves an artistic creation being the catalyst of power, so we're kindred spirits, haha.

  3. Docmars (Member)

    Posted 10 months ago

    I'm up for a swap

  4. Loud Thomas (Member)

    Posted 10 months ago

    @Hejin57 @Docmars
    Sure on both accounts

  5. Hejin57 (Member)

    Posted 10 months ago

    @Loud Thomas

    AsYou may have already seen I went through your whole story. Just also letting you know I can also post an overall official review on here if your story is listed here. It's interesting and very detailed, and I'll be following it to from now on. Glad I decided to give it a read in the end.


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