Review Request: Inexorable Chaos

1 month ago | Quasieludo (Member)

Hello! Name is Quasieludo, Author of Inexorable Chaos and I am looking for any of you magnificent people to take some time out of your busy lives to Read and Review my growing novel.

It would mean a lot to me if you do.

But first, here is the link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/22546/inexorable-chaos

So my story is, at first glance, a Hero summoning story set into a litrpg world.

And your first glance would be correct. Except, our dear Hero is a professional Hero that gets hired by gods to be brought to there world for whatever purpose, and then returned while retaining all knowledge and experience.

Unfortunately, this recent Hero summon is far more complicated. After all, Loki, the god of Mischief is the one who is doing the hiring.

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  1. Thedude3445 (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    If the description is evident of the tone of the story, it seems very promising, though at nearly 500 pages so far it's a big undertaking. Would you be interested in a review swap?

    Sorry boss, but there's only two men I trust. One of them's me. The other's not you.
  2. Quasieludo (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    I can try. Just give me a link. And don't force yourself reading my novel. 500 pages is not a small amount to go through.

  3. Thedude3445 (Member)

    Posted 1 month ago

    I think I'll offer to review swap, then. However, it won't be until July, most likely; I made promises to finish Endless Stars, Inheritors, and beta read my friend's soon-to-be-serialized novel, so I will probably try to start this only after getting through at least a large bulk of all of that. But as quickly as I can, I'll offer somewhat insightful comments on the first five chapters, then mostly-useless comments throughout the story, then once I finish (or reach a good stopping point for one) I'll leave a review.

    My story ATL is here: http://webfictionguide.com/listings/atl-stories-from-the-retrofuture/ It's currently about 350 pages, I THINK, if you go by the Royal Road page calculations, though that's spread out across separate stories. Read as much as you want at any speed.

    Sorry boss, but there's only two men I trust. One of them's me. The other's not you.

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