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I'd like to invite reviews of KilltheWabbit (http://kill-the-wabbit.com). The main character, killthewabbit, is a bodysnatcher — someone who gives rides to casual commuters — in the Bay area. He is also a predator.

Although I am a published author, this is my first experiment with internet fiction. It's also proving to be quite a learning experience in terms of polishing the work as it evolves, since I'm writing it real time.

I'd hoped this experience to be an exercise in agility - living in the characters so I could interact with readers. So in addition to welcoming reviews, I encourage readers to engage and become a part of the story.

And clue me in to your work - I'm new to this world and am eager to learn.