Review Request: Notorious

6 years ago | Robert Rodgers (Member)

Notorious, a story about a superhero assassin trying to go straight, is now linked on webfiction; I'd love to get some reviews! Or just additional readers! The story takes place in the same universe as the Last Skull (linked in my signature) with some subtle but important changes; nevertheless, reading the Last Skull is not at all necessary.

If you're at all curious or interested, here's a link: http://webfictionguide.com/listings/notorious/

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  1. J.T. Peterson (Member)

    Posted 6 years ago

    I like your writing style, fast paced and fun. The dialogue is snappy and tight, just how I like it.

  2. Robert Rodgers (Member)

    Posted 6 years ago

    Thanks; it started as an attempt to try and hijack my propensity for noir and witty one-liners into a story that could sustain it (a supervillain going legit, up against the world with no real powers in his corner). This sort of thing is bizarrely easy for me to write (noir comes naturally to me; I can pop out an update on the turn of a dime), so I might start working on a second project soon.

  3. Robert Rodgers (Member)

    Posted 5 years ago

    Thanks for the review Gavin! Also, I just noticed I forgot what day it is (graveyard shifts have left me dazed and confused), so I updated for Monday a little late (today, on Tuesday).

  4. G.S. Williams (Member)

    Posted 5 years ago

    I kind of liked that the genre and your update schedule left me with a cliffhanger for the review, because as it continues I'd probably still be able to say "wonder what he'll do next" because he seems to get in and out of jams as a matter of course. Nice work, I think you've definitely hit a "groove" character.

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