Review Request: The Greensdale Project

2 weeks ago | bombtasticnovels (Member)

Hey guys, i've been writing for a bit and wanted to get a review on what I've written so far (the 14 chaps). I'm just writing to have some fun and tell a story while getting better at writing so if you guys can tell me what you think that'll be great! Any honest feedback is appreciated cause without it how am I gonna get any better If I don't know what Im doing wrong? Please keep in mind there are typos, just ignore it for now since I was going to spend some time in the future and correct them. Thanks!
Here is the link (click home then table of contents for table of contents)

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