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  1. Chrysalis (Member)

    Posted 3 years ago

    That sounds suspiciously like 'Any last words?'

    XD

    Anathema, a web serial about the effect superpowers would have on our world. http://anathemaserial.wordpress.com/
  2. Whyknotzoidberg (Member)

    Posted 3 years ago

    Lol, your right. I just meant like you want me knowing anything before I go in. That was poor phrasing.

  3. ckarauton (Member)

    Posted 3 years ago

    Hmmm, just one thing. I'm considering rewriting my first chapter or maybe removing it and putting pieces of it into later chapters, so I'd appreciate any feedback on it (just a simple keep it or not's fine).
    Btw, your previous post did sound intimidating...

  4. Whyknotzoidberg (Member)

    Posted 3 years ago

    Yea, I feel you on the first chapter blues. And I'm sorry about that, it was super poor phrasing. I'm not a Bond villain I promise.

  5. Whyknotzoidberg (Member)

    Posted 3 years ago

    Done.

  6. Whyknotzoidberg (Member)

    Posted 3 years ago

    @ckarauton How's yours coming along?

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