Thanks to everyone who helped out last time round, I've used several people's suggestions and came up with this:
Sanctioned is a character driven drama about several young super-powered women on the verge of becoming adults, questioning the things, about society and the world at large, that they have been brought up to believe, and learning harsh truths about government, the media, and themselves in the process. Several different plotlines run at the same time, intersecting with each other, characters crossover amongst the plots, and events in one storyline affect events in others.
Scotland is the world's first utopia, a country without crime, homelessness, or poverty. England is the fascist, totalitarian antithesis to Scotland's perfection, a country where the powered are slaves to the state. But nothing is ever truly as it seems.
Five young women have just finished their required Test Year, to unlock and control their inherent super-powers, and yet haven't progressed to the further training required to become government Sanctioned superheroes.
Beki (link to different page)
Stacey (link to different page)
Other storylines will be updated as they begin.
(The above is the content of the About page. The listed names link to other pages, with descriptions of each character's story. These other pages are posted below)
The Scottish National Defense Association, the government agency in charge of testing potentially powered people, unlocking their abilities and teaching them control, and of training and assigning missions to the Sanctioned superheroes, declared Beki a dud: a person with the potential but who never managed to unlock the power inside her.
But when that power is suddenly released, Beki must decide if she will undergo another year of training at SNDA, or if she will try to find some other way to master her power.
When Glorious is murdered and the murder is covered up by the government and media alike, Stacey becomes obsessed with learning the truth, and avenging her hero.
(If you want to see how it works in practice, here is a link:
Thanks in advance for any feedback.