"And Then What?" a review rethought

I have edited the review in question to be more story-centred, removing my frustrations about other irrelevant stories. However, I stand by my summation of the story itself, that it relies heavily on telling, not showing, and is very expository in its descriptions. However, I intend to read further to see if it improves, as I do with most stories I review. Ongoing series are always a work in progress, and sometimes it pays to check back in.

Thanks for caring, Gavin :)

Thanks for noticing, Fiona. :)