Another new online serial...

Just started one a few months back, just trying to garner more readers now. :)

Are you submitting it on here?

I read through what you have so far, and it's really interesting. I like how it's written as a voice recording, and I like the main character. However, I'm a little confused, as at the beginning, his name was Alex, but at some point, everybody started calling him Jacob... Other than that, though, it's really good, and I can't wait to read more of it!