So I actually am somewhat ahead in chapter posts. The one that's being posted tomorrow is done, apart for some editing. So, instead of lazing about, I decided to start work on the next chapter. So now I've just introduced a new character. Now I want this scene to both be horrifying and humourous. Horrifying because... well, you'll see. The humor is there to kind of let you know that May isn't really a bad person, she just comes off as completely terrifying because she's a friggin' medical genius with no filter. A version that is pretty much the same word-for-word is on my website: https://nowhereislanduniversity.wordpress.com/2015/02/25/beta-post-meeting-may/
I turned my head around. The first thing I noticed about her was her face. Blond hair with purple tips in some areas fell randomly around her face. Despite how baggy and bloodshot her eyes were (the right was brown, the left green,) they still shone with childish excitement, which matched her ecstatic grin. However, the thing that would draw your eye the most was the network of scars on her face.
The largest one ran down from about an inch above her eye down to her jaw. A spiderweb of scars went from her nose to her ear. Strangely, the only scar that was on her cheek was the main scar.