Feedback appreciated! Crap hits the fan fiction!

Hey guys,


I just put up a new site and would love some feedback from the pros. I have strated two stories, one called EU Trip and the other called Six Million Dollar Eye.


http://www.shteconomy.com/2010/05/14/work-of-fiction-eu-trip-part-1/


http://www.shteconomy.com/2010/06/19/six-million-dollar-eye-part-1/


Like I said, these are my first tries, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated!