Five weeks running, and no review...yet?

I have my first real attempt at a webnovel at It's a steampunk mystery that may evolve into a more adventure-laced war story. The title is Tales of the Inventor's War. I would really appreciate some feedback. If you feel that you must be nothing less than brutal, go for it. If there's even the tiniest thing that you like, please let me know that too. I'd really like to know if I'm doing this right.

Also, the site design isn't my own, since it's actually on the Wordpress site. That's not an issue here, just the fiction. Thank you for your time and effort.