I would love a review of my online serial

My online serial - Beyond Pacifica has been on the site for a while but I haven't gotten any organic reviews. Booo! So I am now requesting a review. This is my second online serial and it is nearing completion. I am on Chapter 27 and it will definitely be completed soon.


I probably need to create a new pitch for it but it is my weakness. Here is the link if anyone is interested. Once I finish it, I plan on fleshing it out into either a novella or a full novel.


http://lissthomas.com/serial-novels/beyond-pacifica/


Thanks everyone!


I click on the picture and it says "Error 404: Page not found." I cannot get to it through the navigation either. Is this serial still running?


If not, maybe delete this post in the forums?