I haven't seen any posts here from you, but if you're around, Fibi, a sincere thank you to you for taking the time to read and (quite entertainingly!) review. It helped highlight the main issue of pacing I know I haven't broken through, but in such a positive way! That's TOKoR's charm, right? Can I call breakneck speed-reading 'charm'?
Seriously, though, thank you. As I scramble to work Post 15 out, it feels great knowing the first fourteen have a personality.