My illustrated short story 'Call of the Screaming Wicked' needs a review

I wrote an illustrated a 72 page book titled CALL OF THE SCREAMING WICKED and I am interested in getting some feedback on what works and doesn't work in the project. You can read the book on ISSUU at


  • http://issuu.com/pulptrash/docs/callofthescreamingwickedb_w2_-_copy

  • or on my main website at


  • http://www.pulptrash.com/2011/11/15/cotsw1/

  • Any comments will be greatly appreciated.