I'm currently trying to figure out where my story goes wrong, and how I can fix it. Ratings have consistently gone down since I started - from 4.5 stars to 4 and now twice 3.5, but I've not received any feedback on story flaws or any aspect that needs improvement apart from not enough explanation / exposition, as described in the review here: http://webfictionreviews.com/
I'm also fairly sure that my writing quality has improved quite a bit since the first arc, and several readers told me the story keeps getting better. So why do the ratings keep going down? I need some help, here.
Thanks for the review, Alexander. It's nice to finally get one, though I noticed it's among the lowest ratings you've handed out, even though the review text doesn't really mention anything negative. Could you let me know what makes the story less than 'solid' in your opinion? From the review text you've written (as well as the forum post about LOVING it), I got the impression there's very little you didn't like.
I'd also appreciate some feedback from Kingandcommoner for the 3.5 star rating, as well as anyone else who'd like to chime in. Thanks!