Good Afternoon Everyone,
I'm seeking new reviews for my Web Serial Novel, Arcana Magi (Revised). I fixed as many grammatical errors as I could. Chapters 1-3 got a bit of an overhaul, but not enough to change or retcon the entire story so everything should be consistent. Chapters 4-6 only had the Passive Voice and most "was" statements removed. I don't how much of an improvement the changes are overall, but what I do know is that no one should come across a single Passive Voice and badly written "was" sentence.
For those of you who toughed it out reading all six chapters, I thank you for your effort. For those of you who did enjoy the story but got turned off by the writing, I apologize for the disappointment and I will keep improving my writing to make sure the story is enjoyable and exciting.