I joined recently after a reader of mine recommended I post my story on this site, and so far the network has been quite eye-opening. I'm still not entirely sure of the demographics here, so a bit nervous on how I'll fit in. I guess the best way to approach this would be to ask for some reviews to see what the people here honestly think? ^^
Daybreak on Hyperion
Site: https://krytykal.org/daybreak/ *
If I had to describe this story in one sentence, it is:
When psychology, realpolitik, and strategic warfare (blitzkrieg) meets magic.
...and just like Freud, Bismarck, and Guderian, it takes place in magical Germanies... well, Prussia.
It's a genderbender drama used to platform a discussion on gender expectations/equality and cognitive bias, a geopolitical adventure meant to apply brutal realpolitik to grey-and-gray high fantasy, and an exploration of technology, economics, and warfare in a pseudo-parallel world where Prometheus didn't stop at granting mankind fire, but magic as well.
It any of those strike your fancy, please take a shot at it and tell me what you think ^^
(*I know the site listing is a little weird. I basically hijacked a part off a friend who translates JP Light Novels. Since I've received a lot of support there and the features work well, it seems discourteous to move at this point)