Ok, here's my input. The first thing that caught my eye was the header logo. Whoo yeah, that rocks. However, the rest of the front page didn't seem integrated with that; flames guttering down both sides might be overkill, but you see what I mean -- it would integrate the header with other elements of the page.
The intro text is written in future tense, yet the story is available to read now. That made me do a double-take, and then it made me think that perhaps the intro was for some other story. Sure, I eventually got it, but that initial confusion should be avoided.
At the top right, the html for linking to you seems cumbersome. I don't know how many people do the linking thing, but it'd be easier if you provided a button and just said, "Link to the main page" or something. In my mind's eye, I see a square gem with the colors of the header, emblazoned with DW, kinda like the gems you see on h.s class rings. Besides that, the whole Show Your Support section is a cool idea. I think I'm gonna steal it.
The icons to various social media at the bottom made me think that they were broken at first, because I only saw half of them. When I moused over them, they popped up. A cute idea, but the initial confusion is offputting. Maybe if you surrounded them with a ring of fire (cue Johnny Cash) or a square of fire, that would integrate even these with the header. That'd be memorable and unique.
Can't say much about the prose, as it's not my thing, but the black-on-white contrast is legible and it's well-spaced.