I am hoping to get some reviews of my web serial, it is my take on the superhero genre, taking place in a sort of dark science fantasy setting. I know that by doing so I am essentially following the same path taken by many other writers, but hopefully I am able to put my own signature touch upon it.
Current issues I am trying to improve upon are my lack of scene desciptions, and short updates.
It would be extremely helpful if I could get some critiques and comments. Thank you.