I've got a few quick opinions:
- There are a lot grammatical issues. I know English might not be your first language, and I know everyone has typos, but it's hard getting into the story when I have to reread a sentence a few times to be sure of what it said.
- Despite the grammatical issues, you've got a good sense of humour in your chapter. That's a big plus from me. I liked the observation about the lead pipe being in the trashcan, and I loved the merchant at the end.
- The pacing feels a little off. I know you describe the break between scenes, but for me, things happen too quickly, to the point that it reads like one giant scene mashed together than a natural progression. He goes from dreaming, to heading to the market, and then he immediately has that encounter with thugs. There could be more of a build up between the relaxed narrative and the sudden burst of action.
But yeah, honestly, I'd keep reading. I strongly recommend some help with the grammar but it'll put some people off, but it's a fun read.