Review Request: Lucky Monday (Also, Arcadia Question)

I'd love to get a review for my latest work--Lucky Monday--linked here: http://webfictionguide.com/listings/lucky-monday/ - graphic violence and language advisory, though. It's, uh, otherwise very hard to describe. Detective noir meets Harry Potter? Maybe?


Additionally, I noticed that when the RS feeds updated for my first story, Arcadia Snips and the Steamwork Consortium (link here: http://webfictionguide.com/listings/arcadia-snips-and-the-steamwork-consortium/ ), they missed the story's epilogue (link here: http://arcadiasnips.com/arcadia-snips/epilogue/ ) --is there anything I can do to correct this? I imagine it was missed because the name defies the standard titles of all the previous episodes (which were entitled as 'Chapter X'); either that, or I'm jumping the gun and the site just hasn't picked up the RS feed yet--in which case, beg your pardon, nevermind!


Oh, as a general aside--for anyone who was having trouble reading Arcadia Snips on the webpage--the pdf we used to print it is now available on the site (http://arcadiasnips.com/comics/snips.pdf )--there's also each act in downloadable format, in case you want to break it up. If you read it and enjoy it, I ask that you might consider either purchasing the physical book or making a donation--as that's the only way I can afford to produce the second one.