Review Request: No Where

If anyone has the time, I'd love reviews and feedback on my web fortnightly serial, "No Where." It's a mystery-thriller focusing on a man named Josh as he struggles to keep his troubled son, Ben, safe from a pursuing force that he knows little about.


I have written 4 installments so far, totaling approximately 13K words. Much more to come!


http://www.nowhere-story.com


This has now been accepted by WFG:


http://webfictionguide.com/listings/no-where/


I am still looking for reviews, if anyone is willing.


Hey healyb, I just started reading, and it's great so far - very intriguing! You do have a problem with some ' formatting that needs to be cleaned up.


Hey Fiona,


Thank you! I do need to go through the work and give it a good once-over, sorry if anything broke the flow. I am working on the next release, which will be the biggest of the grouping and the most action-y. I'm enjoying writing it!