Review Request: Small Town Ravaging

I was recently vetted to be posted on and I am most curious to see what readers think. This is my formal request to anyone and everyone... please! Give me some feedback. Chris the editor reviewed it as fairly solid, and if anyone goes to the site to read, feel free to comment on any individual chapters (as opposed to waiting until the whole thing is read.) And feedback at all is much appreciated, as I will be paying out of my own pocket to self publish this title in early 2012. So far I have gotten positive feedback, but not very much feedback overall. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

The title of my novel is Small Town Ravaging, and I post a new chapter every thursday.

Currently 10 chapters posted, each chapter fairly long.

--Samuel Nye