Review Request: The Bitter Drop

Hello!


I'd like some people to look over my newly-listed serial, The Bitter Drop, and rate and review it.


It's a brand new serial, I've never done serial writing before and I'm very uncertain of what the hell I'm doing.


Thank you for your time!


I'll try to do it tonight if I remember.


Thank you! :>


The link to the serial itself in the OP is broken, so here's the fixed link: http://celestialabyss.wordpress.com


Any other takers?