Review Request - The Goatskin Usgar

Greetings!


New to the forum here, and to the Guide, but spent some time looking through the reviews and listings and have been duly impressed. Would anyone be willing to review my serial, The Goatskin Usgar ( http://iituem.blogspot.com/2009/07/goatskin-usgar.html ) for the Guide? I have only limited criticism to draw upon elsewhere and could seriously use tips on what I'm doing wrong/ineffectually/how it might be improved.


Goatskin has the disadvantage that it only the overarching plot is written in advance, so although arcs get scripted before writing, the time spent is pretty close cut. It also means that aside from small adjustments, it is difficult for me to go back and edit things. If this shows, I'd like to know so that I can provide for it more clearly in advance.


Regards,


Khelden Iituem