Review Request: The Life and Times of Car Johnson

If anyone has the time, I'd love reviews and feedback of my web series "The Life and Times of Car Johnson." It's a humor series, and sort of what would happen if an insane-asylum crashed into a bar. Of course, for an insane-asylum to crash anywhere, it would have to be some sort of mobile asylum train, or maybe a van or plane of some sort. But I digress...


So, could ya'll please look at http://www.overidon.com/2010/02/the-life-and-times-of-car-johnson/ and tell me what you think? The website is my friend's, so I really don't have any say on the design, but if you find it hard to navigate or that demonic monkeys have invaded the code, feel free to say.


Thanks for your time,


Rebekah