Hi! I'd appreciate some reviews of my story, The Solstice War. It is a WW2 fantasy story at its core.
Here is the landing page, it contains a blurb: http://spiritsofeden.com/
And the WFG page for it: http://webfictionguide.com/listings/the-solstice-war/
One thing I know that might be a sore spot right away (and which I'm not really able to change) is that it kind of breaks the established update pattern for a lot of stories I've seen on WFG. I write two chapters a month (with some smaller extras in between when I can) and they are usually pretty long chapters (15k is average, some have been 20k). I'm not sure how willing people are to read through those -- I know for the web that half that length per chapter at twice the update speed is probably more optimal, but I'm not in a place where I can really do that, life-wise and head-wise!