Review Request: The Unbroken Chaos

I asked for a review of the original version a while ago, and I'm asking for it with the new version now. It is short, and almost done, with only a few episodes left. I would like somebody to review it.



Thank you for even considering doing a review of my work.

All right, I'll put you in the queue.


Super: Sci-fi/Suspense/Adventure, with Superheroes

Decided to ask for reviews of the whole thing, since I finished it. (If I get a good idea that could continue the original idea, I may return, but that's not likely to happen)