Just finished the first Arc of my ongoing serial "The Undying Cultivator" and would love some reviews on what I have so far.
There are 9 chapters, each at around 3000 words per chapter. Altogether, the first Arc is a little over 30,000 words.
The site listing can be found here: http://webfictionguide.com/listings/the-undying-cultivator/
and the serial itself can be found here: https://theundyingblog.wordpress.com/2016/05/02/a-monster-inside-1-01-prologue/
Would love any kind of feedback/review.
Thank you for your time.