Review Request: Umbra: The Horror

Simply put, I would like a review of my mini-serial, Umbra: The Horror.

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Hey Alex - the forums currently are visited primarily by other authors. Other than our editors who are backlogged, few readers come this way. Have you hit up friends/other readers from your other serials? That usually works better for me.

Yeahhhhh, my friends are primarily christians who are all "you're gonna go to hell if you keep writing this shit" so thats not gonna work. As for readers... I honestly didn't think of that... I have no excuse, which is kinda a first.