I've started this serial called Shatterbrain. I need some feedback on it, mostly to understand if it's a waste of time or worth continuing to play with. For now I have I think 10-15k words published.
I would love to review some other serial as part of a swap, hopefully another one similarly new and short.
As a very quick description, Shatterbrain is a dark, hallucinatory war tale set over various decades in a speculative 21st century, told through nested narration and in erratic anachronism.
P.S.: forgot to add. This serial has NSFW content and is intended for a mature audience.