All right, I've looked over Price and From Winter's Ashes!
Both very good - awesome work!
Thank you kindly for your reviews, both the positive and the negative. My biggest takeaway from this is that I need to fix my site and navigation first! A sidebar and/or a title bar with clear navigation links ought to fix up some of that. I thought I loved my current theme, but it's getting to be more of a hassle now.
I have to clear up my space combat sequences for sure (honestly I'm considering doing the 'Song of Ice and Fire' thing and avoiding big battle sequences, but yeah, I'll see what I can do). I'll also take a good look over my dialogue - I think this is where I'll need an editor's help the most.
TanaNari pointed out one of my regrets - that I slip into more traditional storytelling from the more experimental at the start. I wanted to keep the mission logs, transcripts, and more formal reports, but I found it too hard to get 'into' my characters that way. The future of Far Flung will likely see more personal narratives, with a few short mission logs or transcripts scattered in when appropriate.
Have a read over my reviews of your stories, and feel free to ask me for elaboration. I'll be stopping by your websites regularly - you'll see my comments pop up on your posts for sure!