Hi Safra! Welcome to the community
Right off the bat I'd say your website makes a good impression. The header art is quite nice, and it works very well with the color scheme. You got the absolute musts of a serial site; the Table of Contents, first chapter, and an introductory splash page. You've also got the "next" and "previous" chapter links, which readers tend to complain about if they're absent. All in all, I'd say you're right on track!
I did notice that you update every other week. Have you thought about increasing that pace at all? Besides the prologue, your chapters are long enough that you could split them in half and still have 1700(ish)-word updates every week. Obviously it is 100% up to you, I just know that readers tend to get more invested in serials that update more frequently. I personally saw a quite-significant drop in my readership when I dropped down from twice-a-week updates to once-weekly updates.
Either way, it looks like you're off to a wonderful start. I look forward to seeing more of you here!