Good Afternoon capriox,
I would like to thank you for your review and thoughts on my story Arcana Magi. It has met my expectations, in that you have pointed out my writing errors and have shown a willingness to continue to read my story upon improvements. It's not easy for me to self-edit my own chapters in Word Doc when it doesn't show all the errors I have made, like passive voice. I will be re-writing the first three chapters to address the issues of my writing that you had pointed, and I hope that I will meet your's and everyone else's expectations in my writing.
I appreciate and welcome your support.