This is a bit late. I didn't realize you could thank someone for a review. So, here goes. Thank you, mrouzbanian for your review. It's wasn't exactly favorable, but thank you nonetheless. I'm glad that you're still going to read the story, though I'm not sure why. I guess that's because if I gave something two stars, I wouldn't keep reading it, but everyone is different. I do appreciate that you're going to stick with it though.
Also, I am working on my pacing. You're not the first person to say the pace is too fast. I'm ahead of the story so it might be a while before you see the pace change. I do plan on going back to edit all of my chapters, but I'm waiting until the serial is completed. If I start editing it now, I'll lose track of writing the story and that's not something I want to do.
One last thing, you said the many cons of my story revolve around my writing ability. I was just wondering if you could clarify on that? If so, I could look for it in future chapters and when I go back to edit them all. It would be a really big help and much appreciated.