Big thanks to you, Tartra. I very much appreciated the feedback you left (twice!) on the blog, so I'm really grateful you took your time to write a long, thoughtful and detailed review here on webfiction.
I'm paying attention to the flaws that you and others have pointed. It is really useful when a reviewer tells about the pros and cons in such a balanced way. On the other hand, I am absolutely honored by your kind and nice words about Seagrave's storytelling and its strong points. You know, you made my day