So I was really shocked when I clicked through WFG today and discovered that my first posted story actually has a review. I honestly didn't think anyone would review it at only 5 total chapters in, and it was a pleasant surprise to cap of my evening. So thanks Alex! It's also good to see in the review that I appear to have mostly hit what I was aiming to hit (including the large concentration of cliches, I kinda needed something to use as a crutch SOMEWHERE since my brain told me it was a good idea to write 3 stories simultaneously)
Now I just get to keep hoping that my other submission gets approved in the next couple days so I don't have to bug the editors (any more) about it.
Thanks again Alex!