I just wanted to say thanks here for taking the time to review my stories (Peculiar Memories), since I don't see any way to directly message users on this site. You brought some readability issues to my attention. So far I made a couple of font changes and will try to revisit the stories soon to see if any of the longer paragraphs can be broken up without messing with the tone and style I was going for too much.
p.s. Am I missing something, or is there really no way to directly send messages to members here?