Much obliged. My apologies, I would have commented earlier but I was away from the internet for a few days.
I just noticed that I said 'game' too many times in one paragraph of the review. I'll fix that immediately. If there is anything I missed, please let me know. That goes for thelonewanderer as well, as I hit his fic up for a review at the same time. If I'm off about anything, I'd rather it be correct.
Shaeor, you have quite the output and dedication, as well. With all the travails you've been dealing with, you still stick with a schedule and get your chapters out. It's sad that Dirge is so near completion. I can't wait to see what you have in store with your cyber/dreampunk story.