Thereamid: My new experemental project

Hi there, you look like knowledgeable people and I could use some advice about the personal project I'm currently working on. Thereamid is partially a character-blog story, though it doesn't quite seem to fit there (Maybe you can help me categorize it better?). I've read some of the threads here about finding an audience, but I'm interested in any feedback you can give me.

The story starts at